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I spinned around with wide eyes, staring out in the dark. It wasn't a branch cracking, it wasn't a footstep, it was like… Someone had broken his neck.
Wherever I was, all I knew was that it was the darkest place I've ever seen. Everything was raven black, and it seemed to never end.
I heard a dripping sound, and backed away, and then I started to run in the opposite direction of the sound I just heard.
My legs felt like they were filled with stones as every sprint was slow and lead me nowhere, it was like running in deep water. I was scared.
I looked behind me, and I heard loud, echoing footsteps. I tried to run faster, but fell to the ground. I thought I was going to fall into nothingness, but there was proper ground beneath me. Quickly I looked up, the footsteps echoed louder and louder as they came closer and closer. I clamped together my eyes, then I heard a voice.
"Why hallo, Hannah." My eyes shot up again as the familiar voice said my name. In front of me stood the brown haired demon Shader, wearing a smirk. I tried to gather air to speak, and it took me a while. "What are you doing here?! What is this place, Shader?!" The female demon looked down at me with an amused expression, as if I had just asked the most stupid question in the world. "You know where you are." She answered me. I cocked my head in confusion, glaring at her. "What are you talking about…? Get out of my-" "Mind?" She ended my sentence.
I then understood. I had just answered my own question. "That's right. You know this place very well; you were locked in here for years." Shader grinned, it was wide and scornful. It sickened me. "Then why am I here?! I made sure this place was gotten rid of! It's my mind, it's my privacy, and it's my order to you to get out of here!" Shader's grin widened more if even possible, and she started laughing. She laughed, she laughed so it echoed loudly throughout the darkness, and it echoed through my entire body. I was terrified now, and it didn't help when she suddenly shot forward, her face uncomfortably close to mine.
"Exactly! Exactly! Good girl, you figured it out!" She exclaimed in a creepy, cheery way. "This darkness is your mind and loneliness. This darkness is your privacy and prison. It's your order to me and everyone else to leave this place, so you can't be saved from it!"
I stared at her, my eyes were wide and my body frozen. "I… Cre…" "You created me. You created this. Every time you feel lonely, sad, or scared you escape to this place, as the pathetic little child you are." I now felt my eyes started to sting, they were filled with tears that had yet to fall. "B-But this is still my mind… Why am I here…?!" Shader's grin vanished, and she simply looked down at me, like I was the worst lowlife. "Why…? You can't even figure that out…? You're here for the same reason as always. You're devastated…" She grinned again. "I thought you had really coped me up, but it seems like something triggered you to let this place free again."
Then I looked up, at the "ceiling." There were all of a sudden images all over, memories. My face went pale, I couldn't stop looking. I could hear my own crying from all the moving images, boys who pushed me into walls and to the ground. People screaming names after me, friends talking behind my back. I saw everything, and all of a sudden, I screamed and held my head. I scream out loud, until my throat was sore and dry, tears eventually replaced my ghastly, desperate scream. I couldn't take my eyes from the images; it was like they were forcing me to look.
Shader was still looking down at me, grinning. She was very amused, apparently. She bent down and turned my face towards her. "You created me, made out of your desperation and sadness. And no matter how much you struggle…" She brought her face closer to mine, staring into my now dazed, tear filled eyes with her red, cruel ones.

"You're still mine."
©2009-2010 ~KumoSama
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Author's Comments

A "biography" I just wrote, I think it turned out great.

You can find pictures of Shader in my gallery, but now I will also tell some things about her.

Shader was originally created as a random OC, but eventually turned out to be more. During my worst years in school, she inflicted my mind with such words as
"You could just kill them, no one would suspect you. Or you could kill yourself. Myself, I prefer the second alternative." Her goal has been for several years to be the cause of my death by my own hand. And she's still trying, although she barely has any control of me anymore.
She is basically a demon, and acts like one. She manipulates, and is increadibly cruel.

Should I really have made her...? :O_o:

Shader (c) MEEE!!! And only MEEEE!!!

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:icondann3l:
Amazing as usual from you.. You write with such power that makes me like.. well, Once you start reading you can't stop..
It's Really emotional, i love this, even if it's based of terrible things, that's the past and the past ONLY.
Can't help myself from liking this..

And no matter what don't give in to her ever! ^^

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~You only need a spark of hope to build the fire that makes you going to the end~
:iconkumosama:
Thank you Dan. Well, when I finally get down to write something, I do it properly~ :D

And I won't give in, don't worry xD

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:rose:Once upon a time you smiled at me and said:
"Stay with me forever, my love, and your enchanted tears will turn into roses":rose:

"You can't be human if you are a potato sallad"
:icondann3l:
Np, it was really great :P Good your doing it properly :P

Haha, thought so, good ;)

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~You only need a spark of hope to build the fire that makes you going to the end~
:icondapling:
That's really creepy and you did so well on the emotion, specially on the last bit . Shader is like possibly one of the creepies OCs ever, she wants to kill her creator D: thats freaking evil!

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Hmph!- Alister Fletcher tomb raider legend +KZAA+
:iconkumosama:
Thank you. And she is indeed evil D: Was kinda the point with her, but I didn't count on it going this far...

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:rose:Once upon a time you smiled at me and said:
"Stay with me forever, my love, and your enchanted tears will turn into roses":rose:

"You can't be human if you are a potato sallad"
:iconkyuubi-no-kyuu:
Remi-chan! Don't give in to Shader. She's only evil! >:C

And you got me and your other friends now to! :hug:

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Entering the wrong town can lead to your death... To enter CageTerrance Hollow and survive may be harder then it seems... [link]

"Humans are stupid to be so smart" ~Me
:iconkumosama:
I know she's evil, I created her.

And I won't give in, since I have you wonderful friends <3 :glomp:

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:rose:Once upon a time you smiled at me and said:
"Stay with me forever, my love, and your enchanted tears will turn into roses":rose:

"You can't be human if you are a potato sallad"
:iconkyuubi-no-kyuu:
Wee! ...wait, you're on?

Goodsie! ^_^

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Entering the wrong town can lead to your death... To enter CageTerrance Hollow and survive may be harder then it seems... [link]

"Humans are stupid to be so smart" ~Me
:iconkumosama:
Huh?

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:rose:Once upon a time you smiled at me and said:
"Stay with me forever, my love, and your enchanted tears will turn into roses":rose:

"You can't be human if you are a potato sallad"
:iconkyuubi-no-kyuu:
Nothing.

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Entering the wrong town can lead to your death... To enter CageTerrance Hollow and survive may be harder then it seems... [link]

"Humans are stupid to be so smart" ~Me

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